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Submitted: June 24, 2009
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The Central Guardby *EnzuDes1gn

Designs & Interfaces / Web Interfaces

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Ok this my first time to try and make a clan layout

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Client: The Central Guard

Tools: Photoshop CS4 ext

logo provided by client. ( modified by me ... )

(copyright overlay to help protect client )

Critique by ~ldhxvs Jun 28, 2009, 2:11:02 AM

The only downside I can see, like most others have mentioned is that it is cluttered. You can get rid of this by reducing the width of the two side panels and englarge the center panel, but functionality would then be compromised. If it was me i'd make the right panel smaller or move it to the bottom of the page in a smaller horizontal panel. You really want advertise your clan more than your sponsers and friends and unfortunately the reverse is happening in this design (great for your sponcers but not for you). I can see where your goin and what your aiming at and the more I think about it the more I think moving and seriously reducing the size of your adverts to the bottom would also remove the "cluttered" feeling we all seem to get from it.

Design wise I think its really nice, has got a very crysis style to it.

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Critique by ~obsilion Jun 24, 2009, 9:44:39 AM

The webdesign is clear, the disposition simple and everithing looks beatiful. Every element is easy to find, and seems to match with the rest to make only one.
The work is not original, in the concept that you got your style and apply it to all your designs. The position of everithing is classical, so the originality is not the best side of this design.
The technique is awesome. All your release impress me, you can do something really beautiful without overloading the page. The choice of colors is perfect and fit with the shapes.

Congratulation and continue to release some good works just as that one.

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~i0d Jul 1, 2009

There are no words to express your work...marvelous

*EnzuDes1gn Jul 1, 2009 Professional Interface Designer

~Shahtrughna Jun 28, 2009

The good news is that you managed to escape further clutter by putting all the sponsor logos in one colour (although I don't know if you can get away with that in the final

). The bad news is that because all of them are in red, it adds a massive weight to the look. Maybe a darker red would be less heavy.

Also, the comment box has an awkward height. Neither long enough for two lines, or short enough to make one proper line.

The buttons, logo, and background are all done very well. The subheaders are gorgeous, in my opinion. The double vertical line at the side is nice, but the gradient is a little too sudden. Something slightly more subtle will jive better with the site.

Overall it's a good piece, just some minor things